Thunderclouds life

[Thundercloud]

Name: ThunderCloud

Age:13moons

Clan: Darkclan

Rank:warrior

Gender:tom

Appearance: Sleek black tom with a white chest and paws.Very small.With a deep scar on he's eye.

Personality: Very active cat who can bug you.He is one of the quickist in he's clan.And a hotheaded warrior.


History: When he was only a kit both of his littermates died of Blackcough.When he was an apprentices his parrents died of greencough.He got his warrior name at the age of ten moons.


Code: Fire Cats

Pc: "Nice catch"said Thundercloud.He and Swiftpaw had went on a hunting patrol.She had just cought a vole.They were on there way back to camp.

[.:Desertflower:.]

two things.

1) it should look like
Name: ThunderCloud
Age: 13 moons ect.

2) you have to put the actual code.

[.:Desertflower:.]

*accepted* you can post with your cat now!

[Thundercloud]

thank you

[.:Desertflower:.]

no problem!

[Wildshadow]

Thundercloud, you left out some parts. You have to use the WHOLE form, except the optional parts. You can choose about them

[Thundercloud]

I'll get the rest

[.:Desertflower:.]

[Wildshadow]

I don't wanna be harsh, but it's just so you can learn right!

[Thundercloud]

No your right

[.:Desertflower:.]

poor thunder. The New kid. I was there once.

[Thundercloud]

We all were.

[Thundercloud]

But I will learn from my mistakes

[Thundercloud]

What I wrote was that Rping someones cat?